The winner for this year’s Caine Prize for African Writing will be announced on
Monday July 2nd. The five shortlisted stories were chosen out of a total of 133
entries and the winner to be decided by a panel of judges chaired by Ethiopian-
American novelist Dinaw Mengestu.
• “The winner of the £10,000 prize will be announced at an award ceremony
and dinner in the Beveridge Hall at Senate House, SOAS, on Monday 2 July
2018 – in partnership with the Centre for African Studies. Each shortlisted
writer will also receive £500”
£10 000 is awarded to the winning entry while the shortlisted candidates will
each receive £500 each.
Of the five shortlisted entries, the strong voice and sure-footed prose of
“American Dream” by Nonyelum Ekwempu (Nigeria) is weakened by a
multiplicity of stories about the lives of people in a Lagos waterfront community
which makes for a trellis of narratives that would have benefited from a sturdy
frame, rather than seem like a jumble of linked recollections.
“For a story to have a good shape, it must, generally speaking, be composed of
three parts: the introduction, the conflict, and the resolution. The resolution
need not be satisfactory for the story to be well shaped” says Wednesday, the
narrator of “Wednesday’s Story” by Wole Talabi (Nigeria) a story which
deconstructs the nature of stories and so protects itself from further
deconstruction by a reader -a clever conceit, but one that denies immersion into
worlds where human emotions are visceral. Its merit relies on clever architecture
from the writer who admirably weaves together several fables that take on the
posturing of metafiction but also the allegorical grace of old fables.“The Armed Letter Writers” by Olufunke Ogundimu (Nigeria) is about a
Nigerian community who are sent letters by armed robbers informing of their
arrival and a list of belongings they intend to take. The robbers also send copies
of these letters to the police, advising their potential victims not to bother. Using
the collective pronoun “we” to imply a chorused narrative voice, Ogundimu
effectively portrays, with sinning humour, the collective confusion and resolve of
defenceless civilians and the country’s dire state of policing. She however fails to
give the story a satisfactory ending, or even a sensible point of rest which should
not take away from the story as a whole, if it did not betray some inexperience.
“Fanta Blackcurrant” is the soft drink brand Makena Onjerika (Kenya) would
seem to offer as a magic object in her story of the same title, but the real
interest is that of Meri, a young girl who becomes the focus of her friend’s
attention in a Nairobi slum. It is a moralising story without a conclusive moral of
its own. Meri is envied by fellow slum-dwellers for being favoured by strangers
and then pitied when maltreated as a result until “one day all of us saw she was
talking to herself”. This may fit basic tenets of storytelling, as helpfully
enumerated in Wole Talabi’s story, but yet reads like a sad recollection, rather
than one with an intended aim to entertain.
The title of Stacy Hardy’s story “Involution” (South Africa) is a regrettable
giveaway that spoils the mystery of what is otherwise a superbly executed tale
about a woman who seeks to understand the nature of a “thing” she discovers on
her body. The woman is not assigned a name, adding mystique to the story. The
strong and clear writing is combined with a suspense sustained over most of the
story, building up to a climatic and satisfactory ending – in more senses than one.